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Its midnight, and I can hear them in the other room.
Knowing they think I wouldn't be up so soon.
I hear the moans,
hear the groans.
It may be in my head,
But, I can see him in that bed.
She comes in too.
whispering "I love you."
Her hair across his chest.
His hand up her dress
Slipping it off of her.
They don't even hear me stir.
And his hand's in her hair.
She tells him how much she cares.
The covers go over, Her dress is on the floor.
He took off his shirt after he locked the door.
Their lips lock together as they kiss,
I never believed my love would be like this.
And she's going now. And he comes back to bed.
They just killed me even though it was in my head.
And he thought I was asleep, he made the wrong call.
But, he has no idea....that I heard it all.
I know it sucks...I got bored...
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:icondynastyofsin:
DynastyOfSin Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2017
LOL CUCKOLD

But all seriousness good poem!
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:iconaleeraceres:
AleeraCeres Featured By Owner May 22, 2015
It does NOT suck. I really loved it
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:iconmikio-kun:
Mikio-Kun Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wonderful poem...I just found out yesterday I was cheated on :/ great work
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WishIWasGreen74 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Amazing poem! :D
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:iconpixiedaempath:
PixieDaEmpath Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Student General Artist
Amazing...
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:iconpeecian:
Peecian Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
This is exactly what I'm going through right now...
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:iconchaosreaper2011:
ChaosReaper2011 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2011
thank you for this, this inspired me to do my version, a true story which happened to me a few hours ago :(
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:iconash-jules:
ash-jules Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i can so relate to this awesome poem
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:iconh-nnaa:
H-nnaa Featured By Owner May 8, 2011
This was seriously great! :0
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:iconph-fangirl001:
PH-fangirl001 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2010
status on peom:
suckyness: 0%
rockness: 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000%

well lets test your score.....

well hate to break it to you but......IT ROCKED I LOVE IT. AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconsolitarychild:
SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
yaaaaaayyyyY!!!!!!

Thanks
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:iconph-fangirl001:
PH-fangirl001 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
np!
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:iconhalloull:
Halloull Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
it doesnt suck
i like it!
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:iconsolitarychild:
SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Aw thanks. =)
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:iconanother-broken-angel:
Another-Broken-Angel Featured By Owner May 18, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
i love this
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:iconsolitarychild:
SolitaryChild Featured By Owner May 19, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. =)
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:iconsakurafox:
SakuraFox Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009   Writer
I really enjoyed reading this...kinda brings back fears and pain...but it was very good. thank you for sharing this with us ^^
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:iconsolitarychild:
SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
thank you.
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:iconmiss-nane:
Miss-Nane Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2009
I like this a lot :)
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:iconsolitarychild:
SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
thanks.
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:iconmiss-nane:
Miss-Nane Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010
welcome
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:iconnightmarescometrue:
NightMaresComeTrue Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2009
I just found out over the weekend my other half cheated on me....

I liked this
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:iconsolitarychild:
SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: Cheating sucks. I'm sorry. I wish I could help you.

thanks
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:iconnightmarescometrue:
NightMaresComeTrue Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2009
Yes it does...And its ok :) Shit happens lol
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:iconsolitarychild:
SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
yeppers. =/
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:iconmrsrupertgrint:
MrsRupertGrint Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2009
amazing....really.. made me cry.
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:iconsolitarychild:
SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
thanks.
sorry it made you cry. =(
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:iconitsgonnarain95:
itsgonnarain95 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
yeah i hope that never happens to me...
Or else my man will be kknnnccchh *slides hand across neck*
but that was good
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:iconsolitarychild:
SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
haha true.
Thats what I should have done.
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:iconxoolylilotjeoox:
xoOLylilotjeOox Featured By Owner May 6, 2009
I like it to .. : )
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:iconsolitarychild:
SolitaryChild Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
yay! =)
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:iconkumochi-white-tiger:
Kumochi-White-Tiger Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2009   Writer
It didn't suck!!!
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:iconsolitarychild:
SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
thanks
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:iconpsychol44:
psychol44 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2008
what you talking about man?
it's one of the best poems about love i've ever read
it's realy really great
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:iconsolitarychild:
SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
aw thanks
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:iconpsychol44:
psychol44 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2008
just stating the facts:D
it's relly good I love it:D
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:iconsolitarychild:
SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
thanks.
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:iconhiikagomie:
HiiKagomie Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2008
I must say I love no, ADORE your poems!!
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:iconsolitarychild:
SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
thanks.
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:iconevolkrow1379:
evolkrow1379 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
you say it sucks....but i kinda liked it...i think it flowed nicely...
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:iconsolitarychild:
SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
thanks.
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:iconevolkrow1379:
evolkrow1379 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
np
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:icontwistedcat:
twistedcat Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2008
this is good. really makes you think
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:iconsolitarychild:
SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. I'm glad you like.
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:iconrikku42:
Rikku42 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2008  Student
wow..to feel hurt in that way..can't imagine it like that O_O
i lub'd ur poem, made me think ...
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:iconsolitarychild:
SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
yeah, it hurts...
Thanks.
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:iconrugthug:
Rugthug Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
i think its cool
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:iconsolitarychild:
SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
ty,
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:iconrugthug:
Rugthug Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
np ^_^
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:iconpagespeaker:
PageSpeaker Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2008
Worse nightmare for a lot of us right there. I thought it was good.
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