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It hurt when you left me.
Hurt when you walked away.
It hurt when you turned your back.
and hurt when you didn't stay.
It hurt when I saw you with her.
Hurts when you kiss.
It hurts when you're gone.
hurts that You I still miss.
It hurt when you looked at me.
Hurts when you smile.
It hurt when you wave.
Hurts that I'm gonna be alone for a while.
It hurt when you looked my way.
Hurts to still see.
It hurt when you came over.
It hurt when you said your sorry to me.
Hurt never goes away.
Yep...hurt.
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Surrender-the-Rose Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
oh gosh you dont know how true this is for me right now
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KacyLaShae Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it
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erarosaimmortal21 Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
really deep.. I can relate to this
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Baka-Kuro Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
Wow.. this is so true !!
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DarkJanet Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I feel really hurt today.
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Cadrin47 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Student Artist
im there right now and i have to see her everyday...
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Cadrin47 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Student Artist
oh memories leave me be
for all i want is to be free
stop please leave me alone
my doppleganger my evil clone
why do i face this why me
oh memories please leave me be...
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Luvie-is-the-namie Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
^ That poem ( even though it was a comment ) just, explains me....
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Cadrin47 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Student Artist
thank you, I was going through some bad times myself but I'm doing a lot better now, I'm here to help if you ever need it
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Lyllabelle Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I want you to know that I understand this poem. I was left in the dust by who i thought was the love of my life. He was with me for three years. I started college and he left me because of the distance and the pain. It hurts because you live your life with this person and all of a sudden, you are expected to move on. You won't move on. You can't. It doesn't go away. You will see things that remind you of him. You will not be able to help it. It will hurt. It does. I understand. I am in your boat. We can only hope for the best.
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