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It hurt when you left me.
Hurt when you walked away.
It hurt when you turned your back.
and hurt when you didn't stay.
It hurt when I saw you with her.
Hurts when you kiss.
It hurts when you're gone.
hurts that You I still miss.
It hurt when you looked at me.
Hurts when you smile.
It hurt when you wave.
Hurts that I'm gonna be alone for a while.
It hurt when you looked my way.
Hurts to still see.
It hurt when you came over.
It hurt when you said your sorry to me.
Hurt never goes away.
Yep...hurt.
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Surrender-the-Rose Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
oh gosh you dont know how true this is for me right now
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KacyLaShae Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it
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erarosaimmortal21 Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
really deep.. I can relate to this
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Baka-Kuro Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
Wow.. this is so true !!
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DarkJanet Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I feel really hurt today.
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:iconcadrin47:
Cadrin47 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Student Artist
im there right now and i have to see her everyday...
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:iconcadrin47:
Cadrin47 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Student Artist
oh memories leave me be
for all i want is to be free
stop please leave me alone
my doppleganger my evil clone
why do i face this why me
oh memories please leave me be...
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Luvie-is-the-namie Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
^ That poem ( even though it was a comment ) just, explains me....
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:iconcadrin47:
Cadrin47 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Student Artist
thank you, I was going through some bad times myself but I'm doing a lot better now, I'm here to help if you ever need it
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Lyllabelle Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I want you to know that I understand this poem. I was left in the dust by who i thought was the love of my life. He was with me for three years. I started college and he left me because of the distance and the pain. It hurts because you live your life with this person and all of a sudden, you are expected to move on. You won't move on. You can't. It doesn't go away. You will see things that remind you of him. You will not be able to help it. It will hurt. It does. I understand. I am in your boat. We can only hope for the best.
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PhoenixMonroe Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I love the power in this poem. I have felt this way before about a guy, it's terrible and merciless when they try to make you jealous but you need to remember you're stronger than they are. You are a very good poet who puts a lot of power behind you're words, and I admire that.
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Quibble4917 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011
Thanks for writing this. Really. I felt shitty today cause of a guy and this poem just complimented my feelings.
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digomage Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
but i grow stronger and find a way to take the pain so that i don't get hut the same way again that way i can.
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digomage Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
that is very true i know how you fell i have been there.
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AngelFire8376 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i know how you feel.
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CherryLolly Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011
That's exactly how I feel..
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SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry =(
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:iconcherrylolly:
CherryLolly Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2011
Oh it's not your fault..
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tellmewhatdouwant Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
Its sad that people post horrible comments on something as true and no shit as this is. I know how you feel...
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SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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tellmewhatdouwant Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
no probs x
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zataka Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010
i can really relate to this poem, this happened to me a while ago......hurt.....is painful and it....never truly goes away.......
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:iconsolitarychild:
SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for reading.
I'm so sorry you feel the same way.
Hurt is always so painful.
I hope it works out best for you.
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zataka Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2010
So do I, thank you :glomp:
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SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. :hug:
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:iconzataka:
zataka Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010
grazie ^^
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hatsuharu-got-milk Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
i like it, i can relate
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SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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hatsuharu-got-milk Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
ur welcome
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WinterRavenWolf Featured By Owner May 28, 2010
I like it... untill the "sorry" part. *thinks* If she would have said sorry...That would hurt like hell. Again and again and it never ends. Anyways. Art is release and this is very powerful one from my opinion.
-Raven.
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SolitaryChild Featured By Owner May 29, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. =)
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WinterRavenWolf Featured By Owner May 29, 2010
you're welcome! *goes back hiding in the shadows*
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Twilight-Neko21 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2009
Beautifully done, I love reading fellow poets on DA. You captured your emotions well, I'm sorry you had to go through that.
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SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
thank you.
and it is fine.
I'm healing rather quickly.
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Twilight-Neko21 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010
Glad to hear that ^^
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Amyfan1994 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2009  Student General Artist
.....hurt never goes away
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:iconsolitarychild:
SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
no it really doesn't.
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lozzielou Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2009
I like this poem I no how you feel my ex went out with my best fiend this was a while ago and your right the pain never goes away.
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SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
it def doesn't.
I'm sorry that happened to you. :hug:
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soulesslife Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2009
I love this poem its so how I am right now
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SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
thanks.
I'm so sorry you feel the same way.
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soulesslife Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2009
eh I'll eventually get over it
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SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
thats a good way to look at things. =)
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reenie89 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
This is exactly how I feel right now. This is a wonderful poem.
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SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
thanks
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revets Featured By Owner May 29, 2009
i can relate, thanks for the truth, and expression.
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SolitaryChild Featured By Owner May 30, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. =)
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little-miss-morbid Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008
='[
y is life such a bitch.
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:iconsolitarychild:
SolitaryChild Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Cause God hates us.
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Fbetta Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2008
i really love your stuff, i can relate to so much of it. thank you!
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